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You were one there for me
With arms wide open
Your eyes looked at me lovingly
But right here...right now
You just left me here alone

I have no one to hold now
No one to care for me
I feel so lonley now

My tears fall down like drops of rain
My heart is as cold as ice
My Eyes filled with bitter blackness
My mind is now a raging storm

When you left my life
All these things happened to me
I can't imagen why you did this

You made me laugh
You made me smile
You made me happy
But now...
But now you made me cry

You made me sad
And now my lonely smile hides my broken heart
What could I do...
What could i say...
To make you come back to me...
ANd change my life that you ruined...
:icontsukikosabuku1303:
so many sad poems so little time...
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:iconsweet-felt-sorrow:
Beautiful poem ^^ really has depth and meaning to it :)
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:icontsukikosabuku1303:
Thanks :)
I have more on my other account: :iconii-w-i-k-k-a-n-ii: :)
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:iconsweet-felt-sorrow:
Yes and it is amazing :3
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:icontackyloveapple:
~TackyloveApple Jul 14, 2011   Digital Artist
;~; awww beautiful and touching
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:iconflacasister:
*snif snif* your poem is so beautiful
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:iconxxxanimexgurlxxx:
Great poem...but why so sad, Amaya-chan? and..hint hint..

My tears fall down like drops of rain
My hear is as cold as ice...

Don't you mean your 'heart' is as cold as ice?
Just trying to help.

:heart:
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:icontsukikosabuku1303:
O_o
i look at my poem and type just reading it with out looking at the screen XD
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